Here are my spreads for Saturday. My publication is ESPN Mag. I almost feel like the second spread needs another page element...maybe the magazine title like the first spread, but I'm kind of waiting for the crit to tell me what i need to know. The this white lines get lost in spots, so suggestions are welcome. I will say that using black or thickening the stroke from 1 to 1.5 has not done the trick, rather, made it look better.
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Its looks really solid the only thing I'm not sold on is the title font. It just doesn't feel like baseball or sports to me.
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